It's getting even better! Keep improving!
Yep, this is (new) Ratchet speaking I guess. I was glad to help out and grateful for the thanks you put in the summury.
I'll try working on the next set of lines faster when I get them.
This episode has seen a few improvements and I'd like to see it get better yet.
The voice acting is improving (not speaking of myself, but most noticably Sora's actor, Gil has been improving). I finally heard a sound effect for the keyblade, but you still need one for the spin attack, sounds as people/targets are hit, the smaller laser blasts... little things like that will greatly enhance it. As you said already, music is a little hard to manage, but I hope you'll find a way to add it.
Good luck with the remaining episodes!